The Sound of Silence…
Please…
Stop this sound of silence!
I can’t bear it any more!
My ears can’t take in no more
This sound of your silence…
And through the silence of this night,
And through the silence of your frozen tears,
This sound escapes and sticks in my heart –
The sound of your silence…
The silence of your death…
By,
Stephen Styris,
Bongaigaon College,
Dolaigaon (Mazpara),
Bongaigaon,
Assam…
E-mail: stephen_styris@yahoo.com
7 comments:
Your English is wrong. "Ears cant take in no more" is wrong. It can only either be "Ears can take in no more" or "Ears cant take in any more" The thinking n way of description is good
N its also conspicuous that in the pic its water droplets n not tear drops. So try to make a rel one:p
Hi...
Thanx Malavikka for ur valuable comments...
Actually before posting that poem I went through a lot of research (I mean search!) & came to the conclusion that it can be used in either ways...Even sometimes double negative makes a negative meaning. It makes sense... Try consultin the Oxford Advanced Learners Dictionary & listening to certain English songs, like Westlife's 'No No', or even "I don't wanna fight no more", etc...
All I've to say is that such use is colloquial, & probably grammatically incorrect (as you've pointed out too), but with a poetic licence, you can use just ANY language, ain't it? :-) ;-)
& Yes, the tears of the photo are fake... It was a simple photo, & I editted & created those tears on it.. I'm not an expert photo editor...That makes the difference.. :)
i heard 'silence is the best weapon'
th's 'the sound of silence' is very nice
hai
a poem is 'suxes'
if it s able to evoke
the same/similar or almost.. feeling
in the mind of the one
who reads those words
arranged by the writer
and 'U' 'R' 'suxes'full'
http://shyamsilence.blogspot.com/
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